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PostSubject: Re: The Freaks OOC    Sun Oct 27, 2013 8:40 pm

Accepted. I'm going to finish my sheets and then write the IC. Expect it to be up either tomorrow or tuesday.

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PostSubject: Re: The Freaks OOC    Sun Oct 27, 2013 8:50 pm

character 2. 3 and 4 are almost done. Note that all of my characters' powers are a secret.


Name: Joshua Jones

gender: male

age: 16

appearance: Joshua is an averaged-sized guy (5’10”), with a small-yet-stocky frame (170 lbs). He obviously spends a lot of time at the gym. His skin, unusually enough, is a slightly tanned and caucasian in color. This is a biproduct of his powers. Like his twin brother Raphael, Joshua has heterochromia iridium. One eye is steel blue, and the other bright green. Unlike his brother, who is self conscious about this, Joshua likes how unique his eyes are. He often shows them off and uses it as a conversation topic. He has blonde hair which is short and spiked up in a modern fashion (like David Tennant's hair). Joshua dresses in a kind of “bad boy” style, wearing a lot of black, as well as a leather jacket with a grey sweatshirt material hood sewn into it.

personality: Unlike his brother, Joshua is a very social guy who likes being around people. He’s the guy at parties who tells all the funniest stories and seems to have the most fun. He’s almost always out with his friends or his girlfriend Rachael partying or just hanging out. He’s one of those guys who is constantly getting in trouble. He lives life in the fast lane, as they say. He’s not quite as intelligent as his brother, but is still generally an honor’s student. Most people wonder why he tries to do well in school, and he answers quite honestly. Joshua excels in life because he’s one of those people who knows how to play the game. He doesn’t need to be the smartest or the fastest or the strongest, because he knows how to tilt the scales in his favor.

hobbies: Joshua spends a lot of time playing guitar. He’s very gifted musically, with the ability to play guitar, piano, drums, bass, and a bit of violin. The spare time he has when he isn’t hanging out with friends or playing guitar is spent maintaining his gold-and-black 1969 Camaro SS, which he takes care of as if it were his own soul.

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PostSubject: Re: The Freaks OOC    Mon Oct 28, 2013 2:07 am

Name: Vance Lazarus

Gender: Male

Age: 20

Appearance: Vance stands 5'11" and weighs 171 pounds. There is little fat to be found on his body, and he is cut muscle wise. His ethnicity is clearly Caucasian. He has a light colored, but not pale skin tone. The walnut brown hair on his head is about an inch in length and kept spiked upwards in a stylish manner. His brows are well manicured, he also has a goatee and a mustache. He has a bony facial structure, with an average nose and mouth. Deep brown irises ring his unusually large pupils. His body is devoid of all easily visible distinguishing marks such as scars, birthmarks, piercings, or tattoos. He often shows off his perfectly straight and white teeth in the form of smiling. Overall he is rather good looking, and his wear augments that. He dresses casual, but throws in a few fancy times that are meant to impress. This usually consists of a dark colored band shirt, designer jeans, solid black skateboard shoes, a silver chain, and or a expensive watch. In cold whether he most often dons a nice leather jacket.

Personality: I'll do this IC.

Favorite activities/hobbies: Vance is a fan of urban recreation, especially skateboarding and stunt biking. He also is an avid video game player and technology enthusiast who knows how to DJ. There's a social wild side to him that takes the form of clubbing and partying. Above all else he like likes to womanize, and he has a fake ID so he can get into bars.

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PostSubject: Re: The Freaks OOC    Mon Oct 28, 2013 2:35 am

That's an...interesting power.

I'm working on the IC now.

Also, before I continue, I should explain some things about the town. I want this rp to be more realistic.

1. This RP takes place in October/November. This means that there is school. All characters under the age of 18 must attend school (they can skip school, but I don't want everyone doing that). The RP will start on a Friday night, so we won't have to worry about school for a while (as timeskips are normally only a few hours).

2. Drinking isn't legal for people under 21. Everyone here is under 21. You can drink, but if you go walking down the street drinking a beer or sit in a bar downing shots, you're going to get in trouble. Using powers to attack police officers won't get you very far.

3. Aurum has a curfew at 11:30 for people under 18. That doesn't mean you can't go outside after 11:30, but don't get in some huge loud mutant fight or you'll get locked up. This won't be a huge problem because RPs almost never have chapters that happen that late at night.

That is all.

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PostSubject: Re: The Freaks OOC    Mon Oct 28, 2013 3:24 am

Name: Victor Jonah Villarian (Vito)

Gender: Male

Age: 17

Appearance: Vito is a person who easily gets his age mistaken. At first glance, he appears to much younger than he really is. Merely because of his height. He stands at 4'11. Vito has a thinn-ish build, he's very skinny and unimposing. In fact if one were to look at him, they would see his bones. He's slightly muscular. Nothing too noticeable. He has a bit of muscles on his arms and legs from years of tough farm-work and playing sports. Vito's arms and legs are a big long, and he has big hands and long, bony fingers. His shoulders are wide. He has a rugged appearance and demeanor. He just looks like the tough guy from the way he walks and looks. Though, his personality tends to betray this. Vito seems to have an eternal frown on his face, or a look of fear. Normally, a frown is his default facial expression when dealing with things. Vito is average in the face department. He's not good looking as some members of the cast. But, he isn't no where near ugly. Vito's head is heart shaped, and rather long. He has rounded facial features, and aren't that defined. Vito has a noticeably big and long nose. The bridge to his nose is long, and the very tip of his nose sticks out quite a bit. An inch or two off his face, in fact. His nostrils are small, compared to his big nose. Vito's cheeks are small, and square-shaped, his cheek bones aren't that noticeable. His lips are a slightly thicker than average, for males his age. If he were to open his mouth, many would notice that his teeth are in complete disarray. He's missing several of his teeth, and plenty more are crooked. He's lost most of them in fights and the rest to, other, more innocent incidents. Vito's eyes are small, yet wide. They are colored amber. Usually have a nervous look in them. His chin is squared, bulky, and elongated. He has a rounded jawline. Vito's forehead is small, in the short sense, but a little wide.

Vito's skin is normal looking, but is a little bit pale. He has dark-freckles plastered all over his face--- As well as the rest of his body, most of his freckles are on his upper body, however. Vito's body has several scars, some with stories, some that are just the result of childish blunders. Since I literally can't resist: he has facial scars. Vito, notably, has a stitched scar at the left of his right eye, that stretches across his face, under his left eye. It is unknown how he got this scar, it could have been because of anything. He has small scars plastered all over his face. These scars appear to be caused by something like a cat. Vito's hair is bright orange, and quite notable. His hair is wavy, and quite long. He styles this hair into thick, long dreadlocks, that hang off his head and flow coolly. Which makes him look quite sillier than he really wants to be. Vito has a thick stubble, he has hair growing on his chin, which will grow into an epic beard.

Vito's attire changes from day to day, so that means I'm going to describe his outfits IC. But, he has a "Country style" like choice in clothes. When people look at his clothes, Vito gives them a "modern cowboy" vibe. He'll wear clothes like work boots, vests, gloves, button-up shirts, denim jackets. Rarely wearing clothes that'd be common in a city environment, like hoodies, or any of that. However, Vito is always seen wearing a jacket, or something over his shirt underneath. Something with pockets, so he can store his "ammo". Vito is constantly carrying around a whip of sorts with him. Usually in his jacket/vest. Other times, it's stuffed into his pockets.

Personality: He is a kind and gentle person. He appears to be calm, normally. Some get the impression that he's the laid-back kind of person. Vito is kind to people, when they haven't done anything to antagonize him yet. Then he can be mean or rude to that person. Vito never sugar-coats anything, and sometimes the concept of subtly, is an enigma to him. He'll nonchalantly speak even the harshest of things, and seems to come off as a nihilist. Merely because he'll focus on the worst in all situations. He's very whiny, and will panic very easily. He'll whine and go on and on about how things are going badly for him. Especially if they are out of his control. Vito is the type that'd give up on goals, once it proves to be too difficult. He'll just nonchalantly turn around and give up on it. Unless, of course, Vito is truly determined to see it to the end. He'll also rarely hold on to grudges, and can have his mind changed, if the right words are said.

Vito tries keeps his head down, and tends to stay out of the way of aggressive people whenever possible. Trying his best to stay out of violent situations. When fights come along, he's more than willing to brawl. As long as he knows he'll come out victorious, or won't lose too much. However, when faced with something he can't handle; he'll resort to attempting to talk his way out of things, or running away. Vito is always desperately trying to be helpful. He'll do anything in his power to prove his worth. Merely because, in the past, he was called useless and deemed "the load". Which can be taken advantage of by just the right people.

Vito speaks rather slowly, occasionally drawing out the last word of his sentences. He also has the habit of repeating certain words in his sentences. He speaks with a deep, forced, accent that's a mixture of Southern, Irish and Scottish accents. Sometimes he can be hard to understand.

Favorite activities/hobbies: Vito has quite a few. First, he has done quite a lot of fencing for a long time. He's an expert at swordplay, and can use his abilities to make such a weapon even more dangerous. Next, he has also down plenty of archery, and knows how to shoot an arrow. He also has an interest in whips, he has brought his small collection of whips with him. Vito has a really good aim, not as a result of his power, but because he's done plenty of practice and improved his aim. Normally, it's hard for him to miss. Vito has played tons of soccer, and is pretty good at it.

Favorite object: Your mom.

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PostSubject: Re: The Freaks OOC    Mon Oct 28, 2013 2:46 pm

Working on a sheet right now :3 I'll have it up tomorrow.

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PostSubject: Re: The Freaks OOC    Mon Oct 28, 2013 4:53 pm

K. I'll probably have the IC done by tonight.

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PostSubject: Re: The Freaks OOC    Mon Oct 28, 2013 6:10 pm

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PostSubject: Re: The Freaks OOC    Mon Oct 28, 2013 8:09 pm

Name: Elisha Vaugh (though most folks call him Eli)

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Age: 18

Appearance: Elisha is a man of slightly above average height (6’0”) with a small frame (160 lbs). He doesn’t look very muscular, but he’s not exactly bony either. He’s kind of in between. Though he doesn’t look very muscular, he is actually quite strong. He has long arms and legs, giving him a kind of lanky frame. His skin is a pale caucasian tone. His hair is a dirty blonde color, and is generally left short and messy. He has a thin face with a prominent chin that always makes him look like his face is turned up slightly. Eli’s eyes are a bright blue, almost white. They have a very calm and kind light to them despite his overall rather haughty appearance. Elisha’s outfits will be described IC, but his favorite color is blue. Chances are, he will be wearing something blue, whether that be a sweater or a tee shirt or a jacket. Eli also occasionally carries a tan satchel around with him that contains his laptop.

Personality: Eli doesn’t really seem to show much of a personality. He’s one of those guys who acts almost robotically, kind of like Spock from Star Trek. He’s very intelligent, but acts kind of slow. He never gets references and sometimes misses the most obvious of things. He sometimes seems like he’s...not there, as if he’s got his head in the clouds. He’s constantly looking up at the sky, as if he’s perpetually bored with the world. Because of this, many people think that he’s a jerk, but in reality he’s incredibly kind. He is very humble as well, and often spends his time helping the less fortunate. When Eli does show emotion, it’s usually in extreme bursts, such as extreme euphoria or blinding anger. It seems like he’s not very good at handling emotions, so he often chooses not to. Normally, Eli is very peaceful. He tries to avoid fights when he can, but if he does get in a fight, he tends to lose himself in anger and becomes extremely violent. Eli is also a devout catholic, a rare trait in his demographic, though is often accepting of people with different religious views.

hobbies/talents: Eli is a good athlete with a lot of stamina and endurance. He plays football at the tight end position, and runs track as a sprinter. He is also a talented musician, and can play piano as well as violin.

Abilities: Eli has a few different abilities at his use that make him pack quite the punch. Firstly, he has the power to cure. Not only can Eli heal physical ailments, but he can also cure diseases and mental ailments with a single touch. So he’s kinda like a universal medic. His very presence causes sick people to feel slightly better and cheers up they who are severely depressed. Secondly, Eli has the ability to create and control light. He can use this to blind his enemies temporarily, or can cast light or darkness over an area. This allows him to light up dark alleys or darken streets for getaways. Thirdly, Eli has the ability of the penance stare. He can sense the sins, regrets, and remorse of other people and use it against them as a sort of weapon. Anyone who looks into his eyes with this ability activated is tortured by seeing their own sins and regrets play in their mind’s eye over and over again. If Eli concentrates hard enough on one penance stare, he can actually cause physical damage to his targets in the form of severe burns. A very bad sinner looking hard enough into Eli’s eyes with this power active for long enough could potentially just burst into flame and die.

Weaknesses: Well, firstly, all three of Eli’s abilities are difficult to conceal, as whenever he uses them his eyes and hands (if he’s curing someone) light up bright blue. Eli’s healing abilities have a few drawbacks. Firstly, the worse the wound, the harder it is and the longer it takes for Eli to cure. So, a knife wound or a 2nd degree burn could take Eli only seconds to cure, but a large gunshot wound or bad 3rd degree burns take at least several minutes to cure. Eli cannot heal limbs back on; he can stop the bleeding and cauterize the wound, but if your arm gets torn off he cannot re-attach it. Eli CANNOT bring anyone back from the dead. He also cannot heal extremely bad diseases (if you’ve had Ebola Zaire for a week and your insides are the consistency of human pudding, you’re screwed), though he can heal poisonings and diseases of average or above-average strength.

Then, there’s the penance stare. Eli has trouble with his penance stare sometimes, because he can’t exactly control it very well. When he starts to see someone’s sins, he gets extremely angry and has trouble controlling himself. Because of this, he will only use his penance stare when it is absolutely necessary, and especially only if he has someone with him who can stop him from turning pickpockets and muggers into piles of ash. The penance stare only works if the person it’s being used on knows that what they did is a sin and feels bad about them. So, if you are that sociopathic kind of person who doesn’t feel remorse about murdering and stealing, then you won’t be affected as badly as a person who steals or kills and feels bad about it (remember, though, sociopathy is defined as a mental disorder, and Eli can cure mental disorders, so watch out thieves and muggers). Also, if at any time during a stare visual contact is lost between Eli and his target (someone puts something in the way, etc) the attack stops.

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PostSubject: Re: The Freaks OOC    Mon Oct 28, 2013 8:34 pm

For the IC, guys, everyone's going to start in the Alpha District of Aurum. I'll describe it in my first post. It's a commercial district mainly with glass front shops and malls and luxury apartments and CENSORED. It's the rich part of the city, basically.

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PostSubject: Re: The Freaks OOC    Tue Oct 29, 2013 12:09 am

IC is uppppp

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PostSubject: Re: The Freaks OOC    Tue Oct 29, 2013 12:42 am

Name: Cassandra Wilcox

Gender: Female

Age: 20 (a few months off from 21, she would have one of the first mutants born).

Appearance: Cassandra is a tall woman, standing 5'9" and weighing 142 pounds. She is rather slim, especially around the midsection and is albino in complexion. She has long, wavy jet black permanent dyed hair (naturally stark white) that reaches all the way to her thighs. The most obvious thing about her facial features is her irises and pupils are a blood red color. There is heavy amounts of black makeup around her eye, which makes her look quite sinister. She has petite a nose, nose and ears, with very full lips. Her lipstick is midnight in color, and so are her fingernails. Cassandra is a very extravagant dresser. She wears dangling earrings, numerous rings, bracelets, and necklaces wrought of precious metals and inlaid with valuable gemstones. She favors silver over gold and mostly wears diamonds and ruby's. Just about everyday she veils her face, and wears an elegant cloak with a feathered scarf. Under that a strapless frilled ball gown and three inch heels. Everything she wears is black.

Personality: I'll do this IC.

Favorite activities/hobbies: Cassandra is a reclusive woman. She spends a lot of her time taking strolls alone, most of theses are at night. Sometimes she will attend formal events, but she never has a date. Live performances are something she most enjoys, but its always an opera or classical music.

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Backstory: I'll do this IC.

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PostSubject: Re: The Freaks OOC    Tue Oct 29, 2013 12:59 am

Name: Waldo. And no, that’s not really her name, but besides your standard unimaginative persons insults that’s as good as you’re going to get.
Gender: Female, but it varies when in disguise.
Age: Well, that would depend on whether or not you mean date since birth or the physical age of her current body. In the first instance he would be somewhere around the age of 15.

Appearance: When she isn’t disguised as someone else she looks something like
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she stands about 5' 6" and weighs 112 pounds.

Personality: Aside from being extremely sardonic and narcissistic to the point where one starts to think that she feeds off peoples overreactions like some kind of leech, Waldo’s one redeeming factor is that she is basically a walking encyclopedia of anything scientific with the down fall of having absolutely no knowledge in any other subject. This means that if she didn’t know based on the scientific facts she has memorized that when someone crosses their arms, stairs accusingly at you with a tight lipped expression and head angled downward, that generally, if not always means they’re about ready to bash your head in with a brick. So where as you would intuitively know that instantly and either feel sorry about it or be already too mad at the person imagining murdering you with a brick to notice or care, she’d just calmly note the sequence of facial expressions, subsequently what that means, decide that she should stand at least 5 feet away from the said angry individual, be prepared to make a run for it and until then, just keep talking. Not because she’s being callous or insensitive by default, but because this person standing in front of her calculating if the jail time would be worth it if they did get caught, is a complete moron. A moron because they’re getting mad over the truth which is stupid, because if you don’t like how the truth would affect you then getting mad about it and throwing a tantrum like a 2 year old would do absolutely nothing but cause all critical thinking parts of the brain to going to standby mode making that person also in that instant a completely useless member of the human race. And that’s another thing you should know about Waldo. She’s always completely and totally honest about everything to a fault. If she thinks you’re an idiot, she’ll tell it to your face because in her mind, if you know about a fact you can alter what needs to be altered to adapt best to your environment with this new information. And being something of a genius, everyone looks like an idiot so if that’s the most common ‘insult’ you hear from her it’s because a large portion of humanity just happens to fall into that category.
The advantage of Waldo being extremely fact oriented is that she takes insult at nothing. You could go on international television and say the most horrible things you can think of about her all day, all night, or hell, for the rest of your life, and she wouldn’t care. Why? Because unless what you were saying was facts (in which case she would already be aware of them and find this redundant and boring) the only thing she’d have to say in defense would be; “That’s your opinion. Opinions are emotional connections between two or more facts, thus they are biased and flawed by nature.”
Another half positive, half negative personality quirk she possess is her preference for always being the No1 expert in any given field and when that is not the case, for instance, when two people are discussing boyfriend/girlfriend relations, she’ll interject their pseudo philosophical debate with Freudian psychology and typically make the conversation too awkward for any parties with any experience whatsoever in the subject to continue discussing the topic. Which basically ensures that she’ll have the last word, which, is something generally always gets anyway.
Or the less verbose version: She just really hates everyone because they’re comparatively morons, has a mildly sadistic/morbid sense of humor, never gets offended, embarrassed or mad enough for anyone to notice until she’s gotten payback and really only has feelings for data.


Favorite activities/hobbies: Botany (specifically the lateral transference of the altered genomes in human being into plants) Molecular gastronomy, Quantum physics, Biology (please refer to botany for specifics) Forensics, Organic and just Chemistry in general, psychology and the study of human error.

favorite object: S P A C E

Power: Waldo, as suggested by her pseudonym is capable of shape shifting. However, it’s not your standard form as she copies not only someone’s physical appearance but also their powers. This means that anything they can do, she can do better. For example, Fred shoots a wall of fire at Waldo. Waldo can only mirror the action in every way except methodology. So while Fred shoots a uncontrolled, wide spread and thus relatively low energy per square foot, in her general direction, Waldo can use a mental map of how Fred’s brain works in relation to his powers to alter things like the shape and density of the blast meaning that given enough time to build up the said map, she could eventually build up enough neuroconnector roadmaps in Fred’s virtual brain to allow ‘him’ pack all the energy of the wide spread blast into a point of space the size of a marble then let it expand outwards in the massive explosion once its reached its target instead of directing it after the fact in the general direction of the target. This also means she has a certain level of telepathy, however that is only usable when she has basically downloaded all of Freds physical and mental aspects into her person allowing her to run both like a kind of virtual machine while her mind basically sits back and takes notes on what this virtual machine is doing and finds ways of improving it like some sort of science experiment. Basically, her telepathy is not the kind that gives you a headache or mind control you. However, it is possible for her to send people the telepathic equivalent of text messages which would take the form of minor visual hallucinations (Eg the word WRONG popping up as subtext while you’re doing your homework) and even as a sort of heads-up visual display of data on whatever happens to be in your field of vision. What this would look like to her is basically the same, except she sees what you’re seeing, thinking and feeling the same way she can run a virtual computer version of your character when she’s disguised as them.

Weakness: When in her normal ‘form’ and not mimicking anyone, Waldo is physically just as vulnerable as every other non-mutant being on the planet. Mentally, not so much, but that’s her naturally high IQ and nothing else. Its only when she is mimicking someone that she has any ‘powers’ at all, and all the limitations that persons powers have apply to her, the only thing she can change is how intelligently she uses them. And she can’t mimic you if you’re not within her field of vision or if she has no way of monitoring your behavior. However if she can see a live feed of you through something like a security camera that still qualifies as ‘within her field of vision’ as she can read your body language and plug that into her existing virtual machine allowing her to both communicate telepathically and mimic you.
Aside from her powers weaknesses the one that is most effective is her mental one. (And anyone who knows me personally will know exactly what that is.) However, since it’s extremely obvious even within this paragraph, I’m sure you’ll be able to figure it out on your own. *Laughs manically off-screen*
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PostSubject: Re: The Freaks OOC    Tue Oct 29, 2013 1:14 am

That's pretty cool, but it might be a little much. Something like that should number one not be as effective as the original (certainly not more effective), and secondly should require physical contact or seeing the power in use. Something along those lines.

I'm not the judge here, but that's my two cents.

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PostSubject: Re: The Freaks OOC    Tue Oct 29, 2013 1:29 am

Now that I see that on paper, maybe it's not such a good idea to have a character who can use other people's powers better than they can. Maybe if she understood as much about their powers as the person she mimicked did.

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PostSubject: Re: The Freaks OOC    Tue Oct 29, 2013 2:02 am

Since the original point of the character was to be the mutant version of a PE teacher, she would need to be able to see in advance what the specific characters power was capable of otherwise that point would be ineffective. However, since it is a bit OP, maybe instead of getting rid of the whole 'improving on your power' thing, I could have it only apply to an attack she's seen before (so you use the same thing twice and she'll predict it immediately and be able to improve on that power the second time she observes it) and when she improves upon it in the 'virtual machine' shes mentally running to calculate everything about the character she's mimicking, the improvement would be viable to the person being mimicked so that they would be aware both of what she was about to do and of how she was about to do it so they would have the option to either match the slight improvement or improve upon that as well. Basically making it go both ways.

Otherwise the whole 'every time someone fights your character they slightly get better at it' thing wouldn't work.
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PostSubject: Re: The Freaks OOC    Tue Oct 29, 2013 4:16 am

This RP is interesting so far.

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PostSubject: Re: The Freaks OOC    Tue Oct 29, 2013 1:57 pm

While I was typing up a sheet I noticed this and wanted to ask about it. Is it a good idea to have it to where the optional areas like the backstory and personality are optional yet still are required to have a certain amount of lines if you do type it?

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PostSubject: Re: The Freaks OOC    Tue Oct 29, 2013 5:59 pm

Made a new post with Cassandra, I was two minutes off from adding it as an edit when you made your post Allen. Oh well.

What happens if you use your evolved skills on somebody other than the owner? There's already some powers that have no business being boosted permanently, then Waldo and the original user could use them to greater effect on everyone else. Other than that it doesn't make sense that Waldo can walk along mimic somebody and then do something they've done for years better than them so soon just because she smart. Considering she doesn't have enhanced intelligence or something it sounds like she's simply superior. Knowledge helps, but I'd argue that practice is much more important.

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PostSubject: Re: The Freaks OOC    Tue Oct 29, 2013 7:16 pm

Name: Dexter Harold Chertok (Rush)

Gender: Male

Age: 18

Appearance: Rush has an interesting appearance. Like he doesn't look too out of place in one of those sci-fi movies as an Engineer. Maybe it's his goggles. Maybe it's the nerd vibe. Who knows. Anywho, Rush has a nerd-vibe, like he looks like one of those NERDS who sit in front of their computer all day. Which he kinda does. He has a weak looking build, like he doesn't do too much muscle work - More of finger-work. He's slightly overweight, but isn't too noticeable. He's more thin than anything. Rush stands below average (at 5'6) and weighs 136 pounds. Not too shabby. His limbs (Arms and legs) are longer than average, and so are his fingers, he has a bit of a reach. Rush is Caucasian, he has several different cultures in his blood. American, British, Irish, and Czech, to be exact. Rush's skin is a pale white color, and is far from perfect. He has plenty of scars from incidents gone wrong. The most notable out of these scars is the burn scar on his shoulder. This is an electrical burn scar, and takes up his entire shoulder in a mass of nasty, fleshy, growths. Like a bolt of lightning came down and electrocuted him. Fortunately, he keeps this scar covered up with his attire. For once, one of my characters won't have facial scars. His skin, mostly his face, is plastered with light-brown freckles. His nose, and cheeks are littered with them.

Rush in terms of looks, isn't all that special. He isn't especially good looking, nor is he painful to look at. Rush is in between, you could say. He has a wide face/head. His head is oval shaped. Rush has very big and round cheeks, that are easily the more pronounced part of his head. Rush has average sized lips, that are pink, and poke out a little bit. His nose is very small, and triangle-shaped, the biggest part of his nose is the tip, which pokes forward a little bit. He has rounded ears are that very small. His eyes are small and blue colored, some could say that he has beautiful eyes. His chin is rounded, and his jawline is rather dull/round. Rush is a ginger. Which means in addition to having no soul, his hair is an orange color. It's straight. He keeps it well-groomed, and looking really good. Rush keeps his hair in a very spiky hairstyle.

Rush in terms of attire, has a Scifi/Steampunk vibe. He doesn't wear anything like lab coats or anything, despite his scientist motif. When out on the town; he mostly wears a large black leather trench coat, that stretches down to his ankles. This trench coat is a little tattered here and there, and most damage has been sown up/repaired by Rush. The main purpose of the trench coat is the several pockets all over it - Mostly inside of it. Rush keeps his various inventions in these pockets. Sometimes he'll be seen wearing other outfits, and in that case, he'll throw on anything as long as it fits. He sometimes will be seen wearing clothes that don't match at all. Rush doesn't care. One thing he absolutely won't be seen without is his massive tinted welder's goggles (They look like this, except black and tinted). They're usually on his forehead, sometimes he'll slide them down over his eyes.

Personality: People get sort of an nerd-vibe from Rush at first. They soon get mixed signals from him. He speaks quickly and concisely, in a cold tone that sounds logical. He is very intelligent and polite too. However, he's really eccentric and playful than anything. He tends to make silly jokes and playing around. Making witty, clever, and sarcastic remarks. Just like a social butterfly. All while sounding cold and logical. Sometimes he does come off as childish. This is when he's around other people, though. Alone, or at work, he's cold and serious as they come. Most people don't see this side of him unless they're spying on him. He knows when to get serious, and when the time is right, he'll go from a sarcastic joker, to the cold scientist he is at heart. Rush is a peaceful person, and will always use his head to talk his way out of problems. When he can't, he'll either cut and run, or fight. Rush will rarely fight without a good reason. There is one thing he likes talking about, and that is technology. If you pull out a cell-phone, could even be one of those block cell phones from the eighties, you can bet your @ss he'll ask about it. Technology from the present mostly bores him, though. He likes old technology, like stuff pre-digital age. Rush has a code of honor. He will always stick to his word, and will not break any promises. He will never use his powers for evil, and will use them to get himself ahead, lawfully. Rush has a habit of rushing through things sometimes, hence, why he has that nickname. When under certain conditions, he'll talk too fast, not think things through, and may gloss over facts, or cut time. This is even worse when stressed - Speaking of which, Rush can easily get stressed. Which may cause him to mess things up. In terms of sexuality, Rush is asexual. Meaning he doesn't seek out romance. It's just not in his wiring.

Favorite activities/hobbies: Rush's favorite thing in the hole wide world is explore technology, and invent some new technology himself. It gives him purpose and new things to explore. He's freakishly good with electronics, and can spot a tiny defect in a phone. Hell, he even has his own business set up where he helps people with their technology based problems. Other than that, Rush is an artist, he knows how to draw a bit well. He'll rarely be seen drawing however. He puts much attention on playing with his inventions. Rush also likes to get into different social situations and get information on people out of it. Seeing how some people react to some things.

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PostSubject: Re: The Freaks OOC    Tue Oct 29, 2013 8:36 pm

Other character. I'll send you his power in a second.

Name: Ray Judah Drager

Gender: Male

Age: 20

Appearance: Ray is a neat looking individual, he also has that shady vibe. Like he's totally up to no good. He stands a bit above average (6'1') and weighs 182 pounds. Ray has a muscular build, nothing like a bodybuilder, of course. He got it from years of working hard, and his body does show a bit of strain. Ray is Caucasian, and of Ukrainian and Russian descents. His skin is smooth and good looking, slightly tanned, but not without it's scars. Because of the way Ray lived his life, he got plenty of scars from fights and other precarious situations. His body is covered in scars under all that clothing. He has quite a large one on his arm, it appears like a slashing scar. Starting at the base of his shoulder going down to his elbow. He also has a another small slashing scar over his eye. Because I just can't resist giving my characters facial scars! Other than that, Ray has a few moles and here and there. Ray can be called good-looking, his handsomeness is more of the rough variety, if you catch my drift. Ray's head is average sized and heart shaped. Ray's face is squared and his facial features are pronounced and well defined. He has a sharp/strong jawline. The most defined part of his face is his average-sized chin, that sticks out a little bit. He has a large nose, with a long bridge and wide, round, nostrils. His eyes are small, and have a beautiful blue color, which are a bit smaller than the rest of his face. They are always seemingly concealed under his sunglasses. His forehead is wide, but other than that, not too big. Ray always has a blank or aggressive face on. Ray's hair is black colored and neatly slicked back. He has a bit of facial hair growing, a beard is coming in fast, right now it's a stubble.

Ray has a tough-guy style, and dresses heavily, but he'll will wear just about anything. From hoodies, to polo-shirts, to jeans, he isn't picky when it comes to style. His favorite color is black, so he tends to wear outfits of darker colors. Sometimes he'll wear hats, like baseball caps. He's always seen wearing sunglasses. Any kind of sunglasses really. His favorite kind is his Oil-Rig Sunglasses (They look like this). Which are either over his eyes, or hanging off around his neck (At night). Ray also likes to wear gloves too. Mostly finger-less gloves.

Personality: Ray gives people mixed signals when they're around him. For starters, Ray appears as the stoic, gruff kind of person that rarely shows any emotion. Ray prefers  doing work, opposed to social situations. Because work/business is where he's really at home. He tries to be nice most of the time, except in his own rough way. He can be rude sometimes and cross lines, unintentionally, though. He knows when he crosses the lines and feels a bit of guilt as a result. Ray isn't too good at apologies, and tends to get himself in worse situations, which is why he rarely apologizes. Instead, he'll try to improve and not do it again - Because that's better than apologizing! Ray can come off as a bit of an @ss sometimes. He's quick to get annoyed and aggravated, and oh boy, it will show. He'll usually express his irritation in some way. Ray is a person who's overwhelmingly adamant and stubborn. He'll fight/argue for what he believes in. Ray is also the kind of person who doesn't give any f*cks about what people think of him. He does what he wants to, d*mn what people may think. Speaking of which, Ray prefers to do things by himself. He just prefers going alone because he won't have anyone to worry about but himself. But, if it calls for it, Ray will work with just about anyone as long as they don't piss him off/aren't useless.

Despite all of this, Ray is a very moral person. He can be classified under "good guy." He'll help the people that he believes needs helping, and will fight the people he thinks needs fighting (Mostly people that pick fights with him). As you may have guessed by now, Ray is not above getting dirty when the situation calls for it. Ray is straight, but is as far from romantic as anyone gets. He's just not that interested in romance, and it takes a lot of effort to even get him slightly interested. Which means that he's heavily resistant to good looking ladies - Especially those who use it to take advantage of horny young boys.

Favorite activities/hobbies:As stated above, Ray is an "all work" kind of person. Who prefers work to fun. There are, however, a few things that Ray likes to do/is good at. Ray likes martial arts, specifically karate. He's an orange belt, but he's far more experienced than trained. In a way, you could say that he was trained through experience. He can fist fight quite well . Other than that, Ray likes baseball, and is good at that too. He mostly likes to watch it more than anything though.

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PostSubject: Re: The Freaks OOC    Tue Oct 29, 2013 11:17 pm

Okay, Emma, here's the deal. Everyone thinks that Waldo is OP. So, you need to add another weakness. I was thinking that Waldo could only use someone else's powers on the person they belong to (you can't use Eli's powers on Rush, for example) and the person has to be in the presence of Waldo for her to use their power.

Both accepted Al. When you get a chance would you mind setting up the character section for me like you said you would?

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PostSubject: Re: The Freaks OOC    Tue Oct 29, 2013 11:53 pm

Excellent. Can't wait to use Rush and Ray. They should be well known on the streets, mostly Rush. Without revealing too much about his power, Rush is very, very good with electronics and offers his services for money. Which could make some character interactions.


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PostSubject: Re: The Freaks OOC    Wed Oct 30, 2013 12:00 am

You missed one of your own, Victor.

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PostSubject: Re: The Freaks OOC    Wed Oct 30, 2013 12:07 am

You weren't in the chat when I said this; but I decided not to use Vito.

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