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Time Traveller 13
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PostSubject: Super Computer Ooc.   Super Computer Ooc. EmptyTue Jan 14, 2014 12:13 am

The universe being taken over by an evil-genius robot called Ixelplex SLRV05.
That was the horrifying prospect presented to the inhabitants of two solar systems in the Milky Way.
One, the solar system of Sol, in which orbited a certain eight planets: Titanis,home of the Titanium Cats; Tri Domino,home of the Derricani; Celcitos, home of the Celcitos Cimesian Cats; Plaztemos, home of the Plazmoteks and Plazma Cats; Hexatron home of the Lightning cats, the Cerres Mujor, and the Myochandraks; Camtos, home of the Carastryken; Amazulia, home of the Amazulians; Techinamon home of the Techinamese.
Two, the solar system where Earth was located.
The differences of race and planet fade into the background as all must fight together to survive in a world which has become brutal, unfeeling, cold, and vicious.
There were a particular 7 who had come from there home planets to Earth. Thier names were: Shealta, a Titanium Cat; Celltervex, a Derricani; Misheika, a Plazmotek; Fancy, a Tri Dominian fox; Katie, a wolverine/human mutant hybrid; and Sychosia, a plant/human hybrid mutant.
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Sychosia crouched in a dark ally, the rain pouring down on her as if the universe were out to make this mission as miserable as possible.

The pink haired, green eyed, plant/human hybrid looked around quickly, before pulling a small piece of smooth glass out of the backpack she was wearing, which proved to be a laser computer.

Sych, as was her nickname, hunkered down next to the wall of the concrete building behind her, and began typing on the keyboard of her computer which was projected by a laser onto the filthy concrete of the alley street. After typing for some minutes, she put the computer in her backpack and ran through the alley, stopping in the shadows of another building to unclip an odd looking gun from the heavy, metal belt she was wearing, which was filled with an oddest assortment of weapons including both a machete and a sword.

Sych now ran across the street before her, and on into the darkness.
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Hi, my name is Jadar, and this is my first RP. If I make mistakes, please let me know.Constructive criticism is welcome.
This RP takes place on Earth which has become the galactic trade center for a number of different races,which you will, if you so choose,create and RP as.
The tech level allowed, with this being a sci-fi RP, will be anything you can scientifically explain. I love science, so feel free to go a little crazy.
This will be a joint RP between me (Time Traveller 13), Emma (God-mod) and Stephen (Maxx)and will be focused equally on character development, strategy and having fun. If you have any plot ideas, please post them in the Ooc and we’ll do our best to incorporate them into the main plot arc in the most effective and entertaining way possible.

(1: Do not needlessly provoke or insult others in the Ooc. Keep all the snarkiness and conflict IC side where it actually does something entertaining.  I will paraphrase Matthew here; ¬‘Be wise as a serpent, but peaceful as a dove. Except when you’re writing as someone else.’

(2: Do not godmod, powerplay, flame, autohit, autokill, cuss out of context or otherwise be a complete arsehole to others. That only makes you look like a desperate idiot who isn’t smart enough to get by with the exact same restrictions as your fellow man.

(3: Be smart and keep the party in your pants. You’re sitting at a cultural crossroads, someone might be offended.

(4: put what’s missing in the other section of your sheet.

Which, by the way, can be found here: (there are going to be 7 of them.)

CHARACTER SHEET: 01

General Information

Name/alias: Celltervex Goralgia
Race: Derricani.the Derricani is a regenerative species, w/ powers of mind reading and mind control.they have double jointed arms and legs, slightly slimy skin,and long tails.hair colors range as blue, green, white, pink, and orange. skin colors range as white, green, blue and pink. eye colors range as blue, green, orange, pink and yellow.
Gender: female
Age: 17
Personality: An inventive, daredevilish young girl, who not only dreams of being a time traveller, but is actually on her way to becoming one, via the time machine she has built w/ the help of her brother. she has pink hair, blue eyes, and alot of smart-aleck wit. she loves playing jokes on people and sometimes enjoys being downright mean to people.
she is obcessed with inventing things, figuring out complicated problems, and using, enventing, and hacking very complex, code oriented computers.  
Alignment: detached from everything but her mind and her computer.
Affiliation: affiliated w/ no one but her self, and often doesn't even trust herself.

Skills: mathmatical genius, computer wiz, sci-fi novel writer, inventress.
Equipment: an odd assortment of guns, most of which she has built herself. a lasor computer, which is very complicated, and which only she can operate because of the special code orientation built into it.
Transportation: Gigla disc( a large spinning wheel surrounding a plexi-glass cylinder; run by a computer), and time machine.
Power: mind reader, biological regeneration.
Weaknesses/limitations/drawbacks: can be killed only by brain being destoyed by thought overload generated by another mind reader.
Bio/history: lives on her home planet Tri Domino, w/ her brother. she and her brother have been or phans from the time she was 4, and have lived together ever since then.

CHARACTER SHEET 02:


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PostSubject: Re: Super Computer Ooc.   Super Computer Ooc. EmptyTue Jan 14, 2014 1:53 am

Alright, a few things, Time Traveler. I would add rules, a character sheet, and my favorite; information.  Information like how exactly the big bad is taking over the universe, what he has under his arsenal, the races of the universe, etc.

Just look at some of the other OOCs here if you want to get a better idea of what I mean.


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Canis_dirus
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PostSubject: Re: Super Computer Ooc.   Super Computer Ooc. EmptyTue Jan 14, 2014 1:56 am

This looks like it has potential. I suggest doing some reading here https://roleplex.rpg-board.net/t17-proper-character-sheet-making
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Maxx
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PostSubject: Re: Super Computer Ooc.   Super Computer Ooc. EmptyTue Jan 14, 2014 2:21 am

Violet, you're missing some things. I will assist you with the construction of this roleplay, however I strongly suggest that before making a roleplay, you join others so you know how to run one and how it works. You need to build trust in the other site members before making a roleplay. Trust me; I've been in your shoes. I made four rps on the Sporum that never got any members because nobody trusted me to run it.

But if you are truly insistent on making your own rp, this is what you need:

-A more descriptive OP: Ixelplex87 is the name of an rper on the Sporum firstly, and it's not a very good name for a supercomputer in my opinion but that's not my business. Also, our solar system is called Sol.  Secondly, you need to add more detail to your OP (an OP is the little description you have at the top of your sheet). Try writing a passage as one of your characters that you plan to use and put that on your OP above what you already have. Attempt to make it at least a page long. We roleplayers like reading. The more you write, the more people will be convinced that you have what it takes to be an owner of a roleplay. Look at rps like The Freaks and Of The Night for inspiration here.

-Rules: Every rp needs rules. Every roleplay on here has rules, and these rules vary from place to place. Sometimes rules put restrictions on how short a post can be, or limit the powers of certain things like magic or advanced weaponry. Look at roleplays like Academy 218 for inspiration here.

-A sheet: Every rp needs a sheet. A sheet is the form that the roleplayers fill out to submit a character to you. They can be simple or extremely advanced. A simple sheet is as follows:

Name: (where their character's name goes)
age: (where their character's age goes)
gender: (male, female, or other)
species: (A necessary section in all fantasy or high science fiction pieces. This is where the user puts the name of their character's species. For Exo, for example, this would be 'Acirian')
Appearance: (here is where the user describes to you in detail what their character looks like. Sometimes the user posts a picture, while other times they simply write a very detailed account of their character's appearance. This should include clothing as well)
Personality: (This is where the user writes how their character thinks, acts, and interacts with those around them. In many rps, this is optional, but should only be optional for writers skilled enough to flesh their character's personality out IC-side. IC-side means while writing the actual story in-character)
Skills: (Here, the user writes what their character can do not relating to any sort of actual physical abilities. Maybe they play an instrument, or are a crack shot with a gun. It varies often)
Weapons: (here is where the character in-question's weapons are put. Always pay attention to this because if you get the wrong writer, they will try to squeeze in a super overpowered weapon)
power: (any physical or biological abilities of the character in-question. Basically, what can the character do that is out of the ordinary? The possibilities are basically endless)
weakness: (the weakness to the character's powers are put here. To make any sheet balanced, the character must have enough weaknesses to its power/s to make it beatable. The character has to have a weakness that makes it so that it is not omnipotent, omniscient, or omnipresent. A good judge is to check using this to see if the character are any of those three or are close to them. For example, Exo, who can regenerate, is weak against poisons and diseases, as well as extremely high heat.)
Other: (this section contains any information the writer would like to convey to you that does not fit in any other section of the sheet. Oftentimes, this section contains a theme song of a character)

That is what you need to make a successful rp: Trust, a detailed Opening post, rules, and a good sheet. It is possible for you to make this rp a success, violet, but it would be much easier if you joined a few other roleplays already on the site before you made your own. However, it is entirely your decision. I have high hopes for you, Violet, and I believe that if you work at it, you will become a good roleplayer here and will have a lot of fun.


-Maxx



EDIT: Alas. It appears as if I have been superninjad. No matter; my post contains the most information.
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Canis_dirus
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PostSubject: Re: Super Computer Ooc.   Super Computer Ooc. EmptyTue Jan 14, 2014 2:27 am

I know the feeling maxx....

You also might consider an empire sheet if you want full on empires being submitted, which is fine with me

You might consider looking at The Game: Beyond the End for examples on this, as well as character sheets and the like in addition to 218
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