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Mr Allen J
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PostSubject: Re: Academy 218 - Superpower School OOC (Always Open)   Academy 218  - Superpower School OOC (Always Open) - Page 5 EmptyFri Dec 27, 2013 4:59 pm

Hmmm.... Val could room with Jesse.

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PostSubject: Re: Academy 218 - Superpower School OOC (Always Open)   Academy 218  - Superpower School OOC (Always Open) - Page 5 EmptyFri Dec 27, 2013 5:17 pm

Oh god, that would be horrible and wonderful at the same time.

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PostSubject: Re: Academy 218 - Superpower School OOC (Always Open)   Academy 218  - Superpower School OOC (Always Open) - Page 5 EmptyFri Dec 27, 2013 7:17 pm

I kinda bsed Black and MacDonald's viewpoints, but I posted.

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PostSubject: Re: Academy 218 - Superpower School OOC (Always Open)   Academy 218  - Superpower School OOC (Always Open) - Page 5 EmptyFri Dec 27, 2013 7:19 pm

No problem. I can go off of anything

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PostSubject: Re: Academy 218 - Superpower School OOC (Always Open)   Academy 218  - Superpower School OOC (Always Open) - Page 5 EmptyFri Dec 27, 2013 8:24 pm

a) Lone, Angel is meant to be a new student. I know her sheet doesn't really show this. She's going to develop a reputation extremely quickly.

b) Jasmine is a returning student. She wasn't on the list.

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PostSubject: Re: Academy 218 - Superpower School OOC (Always Open)   Academy 218  - Superpower School OOC (Always Open) - Page 5 EmptyFri Dec 27, 2013 8:31 pm

Alright. The way you worded her sheet implied that she was already well-known at the school. Updating it now.

I'll see if I can get a post on.

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PostSubject: Re: Academy 218 - Superpower School OOC (Always Open)   Academy 218  - Superpower School OOC (Always Open) - Page 5 EmptyFri Dec 27, 2013 8:37 pm

Missed Vespera on the students list. You can add her to it if were going to refer back to it or anything, otherwise it doesn't matter that much to me.

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PostSubject: Re: Academy 218 - Superpower School OOC (Always Open)   Academy 218  - Superpower School OOC (Always Open) - Page 5 EmptyFri Dec 27, 2013 8:41 pm

I might make one last character with TJ's power from Othergrounds, but slightly different.

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PostSubject: Re: Academy 218 - Superpower School OOC (Always Open)   Academy 218  - Superpower School OOC (Always Open) - Page 5 EmptySat Dec 28, 2013 2:11 am

In my next post I'll have Vespera make herself at home in her room, and I'll probably have Seth stay at the reception until Drake shows up.

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PostSubject: Re: Academy 218 - Superpower School OOC (Always Open)   Academy 218  - Superpower School OOC (Always Open) - Page 5 EmptySat Dec 28, 2013 4:15 am

I have a wedding to go to tomorrow, so I won't be able to make a post tonight or tomorrow morning/afternoon. Is that okay?

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PostSubject: Re: Academy 218 - Superpower School OOC (Always Open)   Academy 218  - Superpower School OOC (Always Open) - Page 5 EmptySat Dec 28, 2013 5:22 am

WAIT NIGHT NO! I'm having Angel already be in the room.


EDIT: A pic Emma drew of Mel and Jasmine.

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PostSubject: Re: Academy 218 - Superpower School OOC (Always Open)   Academy 218  - Superpower School OOC (Always Open) - Page 5 EmptySat Dec 28, 2013 6:33 am

Nice! I'd love to have something like that for my characters, but I'd never get around to it.

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PostSubject: Re: Academy 218 - Superpower School OOC (Always Open)   Academy 218  - Superpower School OOC (Always Open) - Page 5 EmptySat Dec 28, 2013 6:29 pm

Almost forgot; I've elected shade as the Co-GM.

I'll get a post in introducing Sarah and Rush, while getting Drake and Adam to the reception building. I won't post as Jake until Shade posts, though.

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PostSubject: Re: Academy 218 - Superpower School OOC (Always Open)   Academy 218  - Superpower School OOC (Always Open) - Page 5 EmptySat Dec 28, 2013 7:26 pm

You need to post as Animoore too.

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PostSubject: Re: Academy 218 - Superpower School OOC (Always Open)   Academy 218  - Superpower School OOC (Always Open) - Page 5 EmptySat Dec 28, 2013 8:23 pm

I don't really know what to post as her, but I'll see.

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PostSubject: Re: Academy 218 - Superpower School OOC (Always Open)   Academy 218  - Superpower School OOC (Always Open) - Page 5 EmptySat Dec 28, 2013 10:01 pm

I'll wait for Drake to meet up with Seth before posting with Vespera then.

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PostSubject: Re: Academy 218 - Superpower School OOC (Always Open)   Academy 218  - Superpower School OOC (Always Open) - Page 5 EmptySat Dec 28, 2013 11:32 pm

@Mr Allen J wrote:
Almost forgot; I've elected shade as the Co-GM.

I'll get a post in introducing Sarah and Rush, while getting Drake and Adam to the reception building. I won't post as Jake until Shade posts, though.

awesome people betta recognize

Also I'll have a post in by tonight; we had Christmas with the extended family today and yesterday which kept me from posting.
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PostSubject: Re: Academy 218 - Superpower School OOC (Always Open)   Academy 218  - Superpower School OOC (Always Open) - Page 5 EmptySun Dec 29, 2013 6:42 am

Half of the time put into my last post was thinking of stuff for my characters to say. lol

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PostSubject: Re: Academy 218 - Superpower School OOC (Always Open)   Academy 218  - Superpower School OOC (Always Open) - Page 5 EmptySun Dec 29, 2013 6:51 am

Nice. I just have a hard time making posts beyond a certain length, until then I'm gold.

I'll post tomorrow.

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PostSubject: Re: Academy 218 - Superpower School OOC (Always Open)   Academy 218  - Superpower School OOC (Always Open) - Page 5 EmptySun Dec 29, 2013 4:14 pm

You ought not to worry about length, that is the most trivial part about making a post. Just focus on being a good writer.

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PostSubject: Re: Academy 218 - Superpower School OOC (Always Open)   Academy 218  - Superpower School OOC (Always Open) - Page 5 EmptySun Dec 29, 2013 10:22 pm

Maybe you're right. Still like to have some longer posts though.

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PostSubject: Re: Academy 218 - Superpower School OOC (Always Open)   Academy 218  - Superpower School OOC (Always Open) - Page 5 EmptySun Dec 29, 2013 10:34 pm

Long posts will come on its own, along with the ability to write well and describe the story and setting. Length also largely depends on how much or how little you're given to work with, and what context it comes with. Most in-game conversations are usually made up of more and shorter posts to make up for the dynamic nature of dialogue. If you're given more to work with, you generally write more in response. If you're given little, it's usually reciprocated. Vice-versa usually applies to non-dialogue based writing. You're allowed to write more due to the fact that less restraints are imposed on you and you're allowed to set the table and keep on writing as much as you want. There's no shame in posting only a paragraph if that's all you can do. Sometimes it's better to keep it short and sweet than to stretch it out as long as you can, thereby making it boring and tedious to read.

A good way to make a long post more engaging is to avoid the passive voice since its too indirect. An active voice is more engaging and interactive with the reader and it propels the story by the perspective of the character, whereas the passive voice takes a much more objective perspective as though you're reporting what's happening in the story to the reader.

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PostSubject: Re: Academy 218 - Superpower School OOC (Always Open)   Academy 218  - Superpower School OOC (Always Open) - Page 5 EmptySun Dec 29, 2013 11:07 pm

I appreciate your perspective on the subject.

I consider myself an accomplished enough writer to make long posts that are still good, I just fall off somewhere. In any case I'm satisfied with what I've brought to the table.

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PostSubject: Re: Academy 218 - Superpower School OOC (Always Open)   Academy 218  - Superpower School OOC (Always Open) - Page 5 EmptyMon Dec 30, 2013 4:19 am

Alright, who wants to get an involved in a sub-plot I'm going to do involving Rush (And a mysterious individual known only as the Man in the Mirror) unraveling the many secrets of the school? It has to be students only, though.

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PostSubject: Re: Academy 218 - Superpower School OOC (Always Open)   Academy 218  - Superpower School OOC (Always Open) - Page 5 EmptyMon Dec 30, 2013 4:37 am

I can lend Vespera to it, Seth is going to be occupied with something else I believe.

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