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Endurance: The Next Chapter



Light looked down on their little world. It had gone on for such a long time, but now it was stopped. She contemplated this for a moment, and then turned to Fate.

"Why did we let our world stop?"

Fate looked up, seemingly surprised. "She left us," she replied sullenly, "what could we do?"

Light furrowed her brow. That couldn't be right.

"But why should that mean the story ends?" Light asked, turning back to their world. Slowly, the image began to shift. Fate looked on with growing excitement as Light began to speak, and together, they made their world come to life once more.

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One year ago the war ended. One year ago the Kyrenien Empire fell. One year ago, the Overarch was slain.
The enslavement of the galaxy is over, but it is far from peaceful. With the Kyreniens deep in civil war with each other over control of key planets and the remnants of the fallen empire, Kydi Adaia and Thray Thanasima leave the now-peaceful Kerettoi in an attempt to spread the news about the fall of the Invaders; a race they once called family.
Of course, the galaxy is in no mood to just accept the message. A deep hatred of all Kyreniens has taken hold of the galaxy, and with the prospect of another race rising to power, the universe has become a much scarier place for the Kyrenien race. Unbeknownst to them, they face extinction.
While wandering about in space, Thray's ship, The Silent Dirge, receives a distress call from a badly damaged Kyrenien cargo ship that was primarily used for transporting prisoners. There are several life-signs aboard, as well as one outside the ship...


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Welcome to Endurance: The Next Chapter.
  This is a roleplay based in the same universe as Life After Loss, albeit quite a bit after the original adventures of Safyr3, Opajik, and Kalia. I am not requiring that you read LAL to join; in fact, you won't need to know a thing about LAL to understand this. I have turned over a new leaf; turned the page once more. This is indeed, a new chapter.

Basic Information:
  This is my first ever RP (that I have invented myself anyway), and I have a very specific way of doing things. This RP will be focused around character development and advancement of the story. Yes, story. I have an overarching plotline, but this doesn't mean I'm going to make you stick to it. It is very flexible, and has lots of room for side-stories too. However, I reserve the right to kill any character that has us IC locked, or otherwise stalling the storyline for any extended period of time.


Conduct Rules:
  1. No mary-sueing, godmodding, metagaming, powerplaying, auto-hitting, whatever. If you even have to ask if it is okay, it is probably not okay.
  2. What I says goes. Don't argue. It will make me cry.
  3. Don't stall the IC. I'm not patient and nobody wants to wait around for you. I intend for this to be a fast moving RP, so you need to post ASAP.
  4. No bad language or sexual activities. Just no.
  5. Blood and violence is okay, as long as you don't go into excruciatingly good detail. I write pretty violent things sometimes, but I don't go into great depths to describe gore.
  6. Don't eat the IC with your character. While I'm sure whatever you post will be fascinating, there are other characters too.
  7. Rule 3 being said, don't post more than five paragraphs (excluding your first post). Long, boring, drawn out posts don't get read. They get skimmed. With that in mind, I would like at least five sentences per post at a minimum, unless it is a dialog scene.
  8. You can have as many characters as you think you can control at once. Again, keep in mind to not eat the IC.
  9. No space captains. Not only do they not make ANY sense in this RP, but they tend to ruin everything in my experience. Just no, okay? If you have a question PM me.
  10. No flame wars on the OOC. If you want to debate things, you can start it on the OOC and I will determine who is right and who is wrong.
  11. Be creative! You're allowed to make your own race! Be original!
  12. Magic is allowed, just not in a huge quantity. There are little things in this RP that are explained by magic, because this is how the LALiverse works. It is unlike most magic- there are no 'magic charms' and 'spells.' It is an inherent magic that is out of the control of even the character that possesses it. For more information, see the "Other Things You Should Know" section.
  13. READ ALL OF THE OOC. ALL OF IT. Thank you.
  14. Have fun, and be happy. If you're pissed off we don't want you here today, okay?
  15. If you read these rules, put  the words “turtle water bear” in red text at the bottom of your character sheet in the “other” section.
  16. No killing other characters without their owner's permission.
  

Character Rules:
  1. Your character is going to start out in one of two places: a broken prison ship, or a prison on the planet. This means you're not going to have much equipment, so don't put a huge amount of effort into that. If you would like your character to make their own appearance, PM me your idea and I'll see if I can incorporate it into the story. If not, you might just have to deal with it.
  2. No huge characters. Nothing bigger than 8x8.
  3. I am all for cool alien abilities. Just don't make them overpowered.
  4. I am not allowing any more Kyrenien/Invader characters.
  5. I may be convinced to allow you a Jakulo character, should you so desire one.
  6. Nothing too human please. This takes place in a universe far far separate from our own.


Character Sheet:

Name:
Gender:
Age:
Race:
(feel free to make one up)
Appearance: (be descriptive. Include a picture if you can, I love pictures!) (MAKE SURE TO INCLUDE HEIGHT)
Personality: (Be very descriptive. VERY)
Abilities: (If your race has any unique inherent abilities)
Skills: (What is your character's knack for? Smooth-talking? Fighting?)
Other:

Other things you should know:


Angel is Co-GM. Her word is law, as if it were me.
YES, I DO ALLOW A SMALL AMOUNT OF MAGIC, BECAUSE MAGIC. However, don't think you can use it as your loophole for everything. Magic in the LALiverse is very, very passive. It allows for bending of the laws of physics, because I think physics are overrated and sometimes cool things are better than realistic things. My entertainment is my entertainment. THIS IS NOT A SCI-FI RP. IF YOU THINK IT IS, YOU ARE WRONG. IT IS A GENRE OF IT'S OWN. I CALL IT...SCI-FANTASY.
This is not entirely a serious RP. I like jokes and silly things. This is supposed to be fun, and somewhat funny. Please, don't be a jerk and ruin it because it is not something you've experienced before. This is my chunk of reality and I'm not going to change it because you think it's messed up. GET OVER YOURSELF.
Thank you! And please! Give this RP a chance. ;D
IF YOU HAVE ANY QUESTIONS, PM ME! Very Happy


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CHARACTERS

Sairei (GM)
Thray Thanasima:
Kydi Adaia:
Wratchet:
The Magistrate, Praecus:

Angelwolf99 (Co-GM)

Somnus:

Darkel
Sennak:

ThePrussianCompy
Strange:

Glict
Coin:

SaraSkyWolf
Nyx Raven:

Dragonbud
Pomona:

CeloTheImpossible
Ketryn:

MaxxToron

Feffon Ferrogaster:
Lt. Samaki Marais:

HalfThere
Donfroste:


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RACES

The Kyrenien Empire

KYRENIENS!:

The Jakulo

THE JAKULO:


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Reserved, just in case.
You may post now.
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PostSubject: Re: Endurance: The Next Chapter (OOC)   Endurance: The Next Chapter (OOC) EmptySat Mar 08, 2014 2:30 am

I shall be joining this. I have WAY too many character powers stuck rattling around in my head.
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PostSubject: Re: Endurance: The Next Chapter (OOC)   Endurance: The Next Chapter (OOC) EmptySat Mar 08, 2014 2:38 am

"I'M A MOD!"
pfff ok I'm way too excited about this.

Say hello to Kalia's long-lost brother.  Because it totally counts as long lost if they both just moved out like normal people and have yet to meet back up.

Name: Somnus
Gender: male
Age: 68
Race: Guardian Chalik
Appearance: Somnus is, as perfectly stated by another member of LAL, a giant flying housecat.  He is, indeed, very large, standing about 8 feet at the head, and with the build of a tiger.  He is pure black, with very thick fur.  On his back are a pair of huge feathered wings, just as black as the rest of him.  The only thing that stands out are his gleaming white claws and teeth, and pale green eyes that can stare a hole in the strongest will.
Personality: Somnus is generally quiet, but that doesn't make him shy.  He is best described as noble.  Brave and honorable, thought he can also be impulsive.  He rarely opens up to people, but with someone like his sister, he turns into a complete prankster.
Abilities: Guardian Chaliks naturally have two abilities that are highly unusual in their universe.  The first, and generally more well known, is their ability to fly through space unaided.  The second is their druidic powers.  Mostly centering around the ability to grow plants, they can also communicate with animals, though not always effectively.  Both of these abilities are considered magic, which is what makes them so unusual in a universe with very little magic.
Skills: Somnus spent a great deal of his childhood exercising, especially teaching himself to fly fast, long, and with incredible dexterity.  In an enclosed space, he can get by with brute strength, but out in the open, where he can spread his wings, he becomes a true force to be reckoned with.
Other: Somnus is brother to Kalia, who is guardian of Kerratoi, and helped bring about the fall of the Kyreniens.  While his race is generally called to settle on a planet and become its guardian, hence the name, Somnus chose a life of adventure instead.  Of course, he soon realized that he still needed to protect something, but he found a good solution to that.  He now explores the galaxy, looking for remnants of the Kyrenien empire, and helping people out as he goes.  (pffok turtle water bear)
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PostSubject: Re: Endurance: The Next Chapter (OOC)   Endurance: The Next Chapter (OOC) EmptySat Mar 08, 2014 2:50 am

Sweet. :3 I am pumped about this.
Accepted, Angel. Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Endurance: The Next Chapter (OOC)   Endurance: The Next Chapter (OOC) EmptySat Mar 08, 2014 3:10 am

I'm waiting on a picture. God mod made me one a while ago but I lost it and she's the only one who has one.
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Okay. I'm drawing one of my characters right now actually. XD
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PostSubject: Re: Endurance: The Next Chapter (OOC)   Endurance: The Next Chapter (OOC) EmptySat Mar 08, 2014 4:08 am

The instant I read "Galaxy," I thought, Maybe I should reintroduce Zi-

I ended that thought before even reading the next word. Aaanyway, glad to see that you've made this RP! I'll definitely be joining this!
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PostSubject: Re: Endurance: The Next Chapter (OOC)   Endurance: The Next Chapter (OOC) EmptySat Mar 08, 2014 4:15 am

Yippee!

I await character sheets with the utmost eagerness.
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PostSubject: Re: Endurance: The Next Chapter (OOC)   Endurance: The Next Chapter (OOC) EmptySat Mar 08, 2014 4:54 am

Ok, here goes! Hope I didn't mess it up...

Name: Sara Sky-Wolf
Gender: Female
Age: XCUSE U don't u know it's rude to ask a lady her age (LOL, she has no idea and neither do I)
Race: (feel free to make one up)
Rune Wielder - A guardian race, immortal in their home universe only, and hailing from a dimension outside reality.
Of course, none of them have ever been outside their home universe before, and for good reason.
Doing things, like leading a rebellion against a horrible and corrupt leader, tends to ensure that you get exiled, until such time as you learn to behave yourself. And accidentally punching _____ (insert important piece of machinery here) out the side of a ship earns you a stay in prison and a free death-sentence.

Appearance: (be descriptive. Include a picture if you can, I love pictures!)[sorry, I don't have any Sad] (MAKE SURE TO INCLUDE HEIGHT)
On the awkward side of tall; about 6'4", give or take a few centimeters. She has short black hair that looks like its been cut with a chainsaw, and eyes such a bright lime green that people often ask her what kind of radioactive chemical mixture they're made out of.
Under normal circumstances, she would wear a dark sea-green shirt, a black leather jacket, jeans, and hiking boots.

Personality: (Be very descriptive. VERY)
She's prone to mercurial mood swings. Most of the time, she's pretty chill. She'll take everything she runs into in stride, and is generally calm about anything. But if she decides she doesn't like something (or someone) she'll enter 'snark mode', which is where she attempts to insult you as many times as she can in one sentence.
She's also in the habit of trying, and failing, to start revolutions.
She's afraid of fire, flying under any power other than her own, and strange spells that teleport her to alternate universes.

Abilities: (If your race has any unique inherent abilities)
They have varying levels of control over a single element, but they can't control more than the one, and if they try to do more with it than they're capable of, it does unpleasant things, up to and not excluding nosebleeds and severe, skull-splitting headaches. It's just a generally terrible idea.
Each is also associated with a single animal, such as a fox or a tiger, and they can select a single member of that species and form a telepathic bond with them. Using this bond, they can merge with the animal, granting them a great deal more power.
The majority of their abilities come from the fact that they can drain their universe of its magic, especially since it is constantly regenerating itself. Without that endless source of power, the only powers they hold claim to are a much-lessened control of their element, and severely-dampened telepathic abilities. In fact, they're actually weaker than most other species. Since they were immortal in their home universe, suddenly being made mortal sends most of them for a loop. They aren't used to injuries that don't immediately heal, and panicking about this in the middle of a fight tends to leave them wide open to all manner of attacks.

Skills: (What is your character's knack for? Smooth-talking? Fighting?)
If you're a friend, she's happy to talk to you. If you're a neutral party, she'll ignore you. If you're an enemy, she'll beat you up.

Other: (what why oh ok i guess so turtle water bear)
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PostSubject: Re: Endurance: The Next Chapter (OOC)   Endurance: The Next Chapter (OOC) EmptySat Mar 08, 2014 5:26 am

OHAI PEOPLE.

One thing I have to say: I will be the butt-monkey if you need me too. Just tell me if you do, and I'll design my character accordingly.
Also, turtle water bear.
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PostSubject: Re: Endurance: The Next Chapter (OOC)   Endurance: The Next Chapter (OOC) EmptySat Mar 08, 2014 5:38 am

What have I done.
._.

Ok first off this isn't a magical RP, so...Don't make characters reliant upon magic.
So I'm gonna have to say no, SaraSkyWolf. If you still want to join, I'd recommend making an entirely new character. Try something new. :3

Secondly, please don't spam the OOC. *stares at Trav*
If you're gonna be here you're gonna be civil.

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PostSubject: Re: Endurance: The Next Chapter (OOC)   Endurance: The Next Chapter (OOC) EmptySat Mar 08, 2014 2:50 pm

Oh man oh man oh man! So joining! I'll do a bit of brainstorming but I might have trouble thinking of a race. Could you perhaps send me a list of races that might be around?
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PostSubject: Re: Endurance: The Next Chapter (OOC)   Endurance: The Next Chapter (OOC) EmptySat Mar 08, 2014 3:44 pm

-shrug- There's an entire galaxy out there. Your race could be anything!
Aaannyyytthiiing!

One of my goals here is to see what cool aliens you guys can come up with.

Don't tell me you can't do that. D: I know most of us here came from Spore.
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Name: Sennak (or Senn)
Gender: Male
Age: 200
Race: Errian

Appearance: like most Errians, Senn is a tall six footer. He has black, leathery skin and atop his head are two large bat-like ears. His eyes are a piercing blood red, giving him an eerie appearance. He is very thin and has a short snout that stops about a two or three inches from his face. He has an arrangement of white almost metallic fangs in his mouth and a fleshy, long, pink tongue. He has long black claws on his hands and feet that are mostly used for climbing, but they can prove deadly in a fight.

Personality: Senn is usually very quiet and sometimes seems emotionless. It's hard to read him. He has an eerie quietness to him that only makes people want to dig deeper and know more about him. Though they usually fail in the process. He is sometimes defensive of his secrets and his personality and will act harshly to those who try to pry in at them. He usually does not like other creatures and will not likely be nice to many of them unless he has to.


Abilities: Senn' like most Errians, can climb most surfaces, even if there is little foot holders or friction. Senn also has poisonous venom in his fangs. He can emit a loud noise that acts as a call to other Errians in the area and only Errians will recognize what it means.

Skills: Senn is extremely, extremely intelligent. Though he never likes to show it because others will see him as a valuable ally, which he wants nothing of. Senn also is very cunning and extremely charismatic and persuasive when he wants to be. He is extremely clever and a very good problem solver, as most Errians are.

Other: turtle water bear
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Accepted, Darky. :3
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Name: Strange
Gender: "Male"
Age:  29
Race: Ayataan
Appearance:
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Strange, like most Ayataans, is a blob with an exoskeleton. The black parts that you cans see are the parts not covered by an exoskeleton (If he was entirely covered in an exoskeleton, he would be unable to move). Said parts are "weak spots," which are more susceptible to damage.

The uncovered parts on his head are eye spots, not covered by the exoskeleton so that he can see. Because the eyes are important, he has to plates underneath his skull that form two bony eyelids. Once they're closed, of course, his eyes are more protected.

It should be noted that Strange's appearance isn't the norm for Ayataans. They all have different exoskeletons, making them have shapes of almost every thing with legs that you can imagine.

Personality: Strange isn't like normal Ayataans. Instead of having the normal "Kill kill kill" attitude, he is completely fascinated by the universe.

His fascination with the universe isn't Unique, as many Ayataans are also very interested in learning how the universe works. However, Strange specializes more in the science department, hence the name "Strange," given to him by his guardians.

Strange is a little socially awkward, which results in him simply not talking much. He may seem professional on the outside, but he is a little naive.  Strange rarely reveals personal information to people, as to "preserve Ayataan secrets" (strangely enough, Strange wasn't told much about said "Ayataan secrets").

Abilities: The Ayataans aren't very powerful in the magic department (Strange himself decided that 'magic' doesn't exist). However,  they are usually fantastic warriors. Ayataans are also very flexible and agile, because of their body underneath the exoskeleton. Many can run very quickly; up to 25 miles per hour.

The exoskeleton is very strong, being an inch thick in some places. The exoskeleton is about as strong as steel in some places, like the head, chest, and legs, but other places, like the arms and the "ribs" on the "stomach," is about as strong as plastic (Very thick plastic, that is). Once you destroy enough of the exoskeleton, the blob inside can't keep it's shape and just melts.

Once the Exoskeleton grows over the blob that is a juvenile Ayataan, they stay in it for their entire lives. However, once the exoskeleton is destroyed, it is once again a formless blob. However, it might not be smart to do this. The Ayataan may be 100% more vulnerable, it is also much more dangerous. It can move much more quickly without its exoskeleton, and it secretes a sort of acid-like liquid, used in nature to rebuild the exoskeleton, but has corrosive properties on biological matter. Putting your hand on an Ayataan in blob form for 10 seconds can remove a layer of skin. Of course, it gets worse the longer you touch it.

Skills: Strange is excellent at problem solving. Years of problem solving, and simply learning things, have made him extremely intelligent, to the point where he can guess what is going  to happen (with enough information) within the next second. He is also a faster runner than most Ayataans, able to run 27 miles per hour. Strange's fighting skills aren't good, but they're not bad, either. He's below average, but it's just enough for him to get by in a fight. In a fair fight, that is.

Other: turtle water bear

Got it done! I feel that Strange is a little overpowered, but you can decide if I'm right.


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Whoa. That is awesome. Precisely what I wanted; cool aliens. :DI applaud!
Accepted- tho I would like to know just how durable the exoskeleton is.

And may I just say, holy cow you can draw! Very Happy
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Yaaaahh!
I like them both, and they should fit nicely Very Happy
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Nice drawing Prussian! I must say, I died laughing when I saw the caption "crappy right hand". It's not crappy though, it's really good! Very Happy


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Whaaaaa- that's his though what.
That doesn't even look like my drawings D:
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PostSubject: Re: Endurance: The Next Chapter (OOC)   Endurance: The Next Chapter (OOC) EmptySat Mar 08, 2014 9:10 pm

Name: Coin
Gender: Male
Age: 13
Race: Sigael
Appearance: Coin is easily one of the largest insects of the galaxy, along with his Sigael companions, which are mostly extinct. His thick, stocky body is white, with three white circles on each side of his abdomen. Coin's thorax is filled with many functioning devices, most of which protrude in long, chromatic cords. The bases of them are concealed with white fur. There's a control panel on his back which can be used to change certain functions of his body. His exoskeleton is covered in somewhat of a thin skin,which gives parts of his build a lime green tint. He has wings that resemble a butterfly's, though they are nowhere near the same size. His mouth has two jaws, and sharp fangs, though they aren't very threatening to most. His body is close to the ground, and 4 legs carry it, along with the green circular patterns on his joints. Two primitive appendages are used as arms with some sort of crab-like claws, though they're thin and have two ivory points protruding from them. Coin is 5 feet tall. Instead of having the usual compound eyes that most bugs have, he has cat eyes.
Personality: Coin is a very happy Sigael, and is just fine entertaining himself. He thinks he doesn't need friends as long as he has himself. Though he's been lonely, he tends to deal with it. He's not easily scared, and is quite complacent with his surroundings. Coin tries his absolute best to stay positive.
Abilities: Coin is able to spray venom from his mouth that burns skin on contact. Three stingers are located on the back of his abdomen. He's able to fly very short distances, about 50 yards before becoming exhausted.
Skills: Sigaels were known for their strength, though Coin usually neglects this skill due to fear that he may hurt somebody. Due to being alive much longer than most of his kind, he's learned from many of his mistakes, and is considered, "smarter than your average Sigael."
Other: turtle water bear (wait what?)


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PostSubject: Re: Endurance: The Next Chapter (OOC)   Endurance: The Next Chapter (OOC) EmptySat Mar 08, 2014 9:18 pm

I made some edits, including spelling fixes and the strength of the exoskeleton.

Also, thanks, everyone! I just had that rare moment when I decided that I was able to create good-ish art, and I went for it.
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